Not bad.
The kick is definitely overpowering in the beginning. It sounds cool, but tone down the lowest of the low bass frequencies to get the unnecessary noise out of there. Also, try some compression on the kick if you haven't already to give it a punchier sound. Now, as for the melody, it's OK, but when you keep moving it up in intervals it sounds a bit strange. The background pads are actually really nice, probably keep those the same. Something you should work on is staying within the same key so your parts don't clash. Also, some rhythmic variation in the lead synth goes a long way, just mix it up a little bit with some interesting fills to keep the listener...well... listening. This has serious potential, it just needs some polishing, overall great start bro! Looking forward to the finished version.
DJ-Hectic
8/10
5/5